Evalation of my Animated story

In the context of (In the neighbourhood)
I will design and produce a (An Animated story for
(Children 5 to 12 years old)
to be used to (To STOP animal control  and all
sorts of owners to stop hurting
their pets or pet. ).

My animated story us currently under construction.
Could you please help me by giving me feedback on my conceputal
of my animated story.