Blog Commenting/ Fui

This week I have made a comment on Fui's blog. She has worked very well. I have decided to do her new blog post that she posted a few days ago. If you would like to see her blog it would be a the bottom of the blurb.

Fui's blog- http://pbsfuif.blogspot.co.nz/

Blog Commenting on Mele's Blog

Today I commented on Mele's blog. I like how her Venn diagram colors were really cool and she worked very hard. I said in my comment I love her comparison. I also asked her a question about her Venn diagram.

If you would like to see her blog and comment on her  blog please click on the link.

Mele's Blog - http://pbsmelel.blogspot.com/2018/08/structure-comparison.html#comment-form

Commenting on Magenta and Nyjah's Blog.

Today I commented on Nyjah and Magenta's blog. On Magenta's blog her blog was about her Eels DLO if facts and interesting . For Nyjah's blog she made a DLO with information about Water View and Gotthard tunnel. If you want to check out there blog it would be linked at the end of this blurb.

Nyjah - https://pbsnyjahs.blogspot.com/2018/08/water-view-and-gotthard-tunnel.html?showComment=1535494717826#c4890480132658078677

Magenta - https://pbsmagentaf.blogspot.com/2018/08/eels-dlo.html?showComment=1535494876737#c423627265412817204

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Yesterday LS2 worked in a peer or triplets. Since I was in a group of  3 we went clock wise, which meant I commented on Nyjah's blog Nyjah commented on Fuis blog and Fui commented on my blog. We all had to give  feed forward,suggestion, asking them a question, what they loved about there work, a greeting and also a positive attitude. I forgot to add a positive attitude at the end once I posted my comment. 

Blog Commenting on Max's blog

Today for blog commenting I got chosen to comment on Max's blog. We all got spited into groups of 3 or 2. I was with Jonathan and Sky. I chose this one because this one was my favorite one. I gave him some advice if needed some help for his blurb. He started blogging in 2016-2018.

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Today I commented on Fui's blog for Summer Learning Journey. I told her she needs to work on things and I was also giving her positive things too.

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Today I commented on Chris's blog. I really loved how his acting was really good like everyone else that made one. I felt like during his video it looked like he was reading his script mos of the time instead of just looking at the camera.

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Charlize Blog
Today I commented on Charlize blog. I did her blog because I haven't done blog before and I want to see how good her blurb is. She really needs to proof read her blurb and also make her blurb longer

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Florence Blog
Today for commenting I commented on Florence's blog. She was my favourite blog because she had a clear blurb and her poster was very clear. If you want to agree with me her blog would be at the top so that  you can see how great her blurb and work is.

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Ellenora's Fire Station Link
Today I commented on Ellenora's blog. I know I have done it but I only did it because she was closer to my blog. I told her that she needs to proof read her work and add more detail into it. I asked her a question and positive attitude to it at the end of it. If you want to commented on her blog it would be on my blog post.

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Link To Ellenora's Blog

Today for Blog Commenting I commented on Ellenoras. This was kind of different I haven't comment on her blog before so I did it today. I said to use that she needs to proof read her blog because some of her work didn't make sense.. If you want to see her blog it would be at the top where it says Link to Ellenora's Blog.

Commenting on Nyjahs's Blog

Today I commented on Nyjahs Blog. What did you learned? I learnt alot of things from her blog that I dont really put in my blog. How did you learned? I told her that she did a  good job because she had a link that people had to copy and paste it on google so that they can make up there own one to. 

Nyjahs Blog Link

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Giovanni's Blog

Today for commenting I decided to comment on Giovanni's blog. The reason I commented on his blog is because I haven't done his blog yet. So I decided to do something new. He needs to work on adding capture letters in the beginning of a sentence because you have to do it because it is the first thing you write.

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Today for commenting I commented on Joel's blog. I wanted to comment on her blog because I haven't comment on her blog this term so I would know what kind of writing she does in her work and in her blurb.

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LINK TO HIS BLOG
LI: To comment of peoples blog by using 6 times.
Today for Commenting I commented on Chris's blog. I did it on his daliy 6. He did a very clear blog.

Commenting on Jack's Blog

LI: To use the 6 things for blog commenting.

Today for Commenting I commented on Jack's blog because I really want do something different and comment on someone that I haven't done last year or last term which I didn't do him. I said he doesn't need to work on anything yet because his blurb was clear and people could understand his blurb. 

Jack's Blog

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Today I commented on Florence blog. This is my second time commenting on her blog. The first time that I commented on her blog was when we did the Winter learning journey. I told her that she needed to add a link to her photo so that they would want to know some of the information about her blog post. 

LINK TO HER BLOG

MY BLOG LINK

Commenting on Tamaki Primary School

LI: To use all 6 strategy while comment.

Today for commenting I commented on Akanesi. What did you learned? I learnt how to make muffins because I have ingredients from Akanesi's blog. How did you learned? I had to commented on Tamaki Priamry school instead on LS1 and LS2 blogs. In his or hers blog post I learnt how to cook Muffins and I also learnt how to not to add emojis to my tittle.

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Today I commented on Sakina's Blog. I told Sakina that she needs to work on using capture letters to the name of the game when she is adding what is Free Rice about and other things that was in her blog post.  I would be putting her blog link at the end of the page.

Sakina's Blogger

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I commented on LS2 and Tamki primary school. But it was to the years 7's and 8's. I commented on my sister Magenta from LS2  and I also commented on Stacey from Tamaki Primary school which she is a year 8 and Magenta is a year 7.