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Thursday, 27 October 2016

The Haunted House


The Haunted House
One day a  Dad, Mum and a daughter moved into a spooky  house.
When they looked around The house they saw blood in the bathroom and in the sync. The daughter was so scared that this was the wrong house so the ghost said this “Stop right now or I will kill your family The daughter said.
Okay as you say so”. But the next day  in the morning they left before the Ghost heard them. To a next House but he won’t stop hunting them But the dad died instead of all of them it of them it wasn’t good time for the family.


LI: to use descriptive language in a narrative text.
This is my work on the haunted house that is writhing that i did as a narrative.
it was easy because i just change some of my words into differences ones.



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