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Friday 11 September 2015

Should Panmure Bridge School have a Swimming Pool?



Should we have an indoor swimming pool at Panmure Bridge School?
Introduction
State what you are arguing about
State your opinion
For or Against
I am for having a swimming pool because lots of kids can  learn how to swim. Kids should not drown and they can be healthy if they learnt how to swim.
Reason 1
safety.
Supportive details


It is good to know what to do in the water.
If you are too little then you have to wear a life jacket but if you don’t then you will drown in the swimming pool. You might be saved at the hospital. So learning to swim is very important.
Reason 2
Exercise

Supportive details


When you go swimming it exercises your body. When you swim it makes your body fit. Swimming makes you bones strong.
Reason 3
Learning.

Supportive details



You can do fun things with your friends in the swimming pool and you can learn how to do strokes and techniques.  Some of your family members can help you learn how to swim and if you do know how to swim then you can teach each other.
Conclusion



I think we should have a pool at Panmure Bridge School because students can learn to swim and get fit. Later on in life they can save lives of other people if they learnt how to swim.

This is my argument scaffold. I have been learning to come up with reasons in my writing.

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