Hello Chavda, you have a couple of spelling mistakes so you should go and fix them. Also some of the sentences don't make sense so double check your work before your publish it. You should also put all of the names for the famous people because some people might not know who they are. Keep on working hard.
Thanks for making the time to create this great DLO, Chavda. I love the bright colours that you have used! There are a few sentences in the DLO that don't quite make sense. Could you please revise the sentence at the bottom of the DLO? It would really help me to better understand the focus for the DLO. I am really fascinated to know more and I want to be sure that I understand exactly what you've written.
As AJ has mentioned, it would be great if you could post the names of the famous people. You've included titles for David Tua, Dwayne Douglas and Joseph Parker but there is no information yet on the name of the rugby player or DJ Khaleed's real name.
When you have a moment could you please update the slide with this information? I'd really appreciate it!
Hello Chavda, you have a couple of spelling mistakes so you should go and fix them. Also some of the sentences don't make sense so double check your work before your publish it. You should also put all of the names for the famous people because some people might not know who they are. Keep on working hard.
ReplyDeleteHi Chavda and AJ,
ReplyDeleteThanks for making the time to create this great DLO, Chavda. I love the bright colours that you have used! There are a few sentences in the DLO that don't quite make sense. Could you please revise the sentence at the bottom of the DLO? It would really help me to better understand the focus for the DLO. I am really fascinated to know more and I want to be sure that I understand exactly what you've written.
As AJ has mentioned, it would be great if you could post the names of the famous people. You've included titles for David Tua, Dwayne Douglas and Joseph Parker but there is no information yet on the name of the rugby player or DJ Khaleed's real name.
When you have a moment could you please update the slide with this information? I'd really appreciate it!
Thanks so much, Chavda :)
~ Rachel
Hello Chavda
ReplyDeleteNice to see lots of different colors for this activity. Fantastic job! Keep up the great work Chavda.
Daniel