Wednesday, 9 January 2019

Commenting on Mojtaba blog | 16

A few days ago I commented on Mojitaba blog. His blog post was about him choosing 3 or 4 family members to go cycling in Taupo. Link to blog -

1 comment:

  1. Hi Chavda!
    I love your blog post about you commenting on Mojtaba's blog. I found a mistake in your blurb. In the first sentence you say that you are commenting on "Mojtaba" blog. You didn't make sense. To change it just add the apostrophe & s at the end.
    Keep up the great work! - Florence